The Passing

September 23, 2005, 12:17 am

The Passing Faint melancholy hum lulls the wind, a season departs. Romance clings in shiver to garden wall, its vine barren, once swollen pink with wild glory. Secret whispers trail Summers hem as she...

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Re: The Passing

September 23, 2005, 4:11 am

wow Sky! this has the beauty of the fading season drifting through the mind.

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Re: The Passing

September 23, 2005, 4:47 am

Beautiful poem for the changing seasons...(((Sky))), Dan

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September 23, 2005, 12:02 pm

beautifully tight words...well linked and meaningful, sky... i like...Romance clings in shiver...nice vibe how wind is linked to sighs..masterful louis

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September 23, 2005, 3:01 pm

wonderful imagery stained in loss, this is delightfulKeep Shining! Sammie

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September 23, 2005, 3:46 pm

snapper..That's a lovely comment..thank you. Sky

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September 23, 2005, 3:48 pm

Thank you (((Dan)))...can already feel the chill in the night. Sky

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September 23, 2005, 3:51 pm

Thank you Louis, your detailed comment is very thoughtful. Sky

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September 23, 2005, 3:53 pm

Thank you Sammie for your perceptive reply. Sky

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September 23, 2005, 8:49 pm

What an amazing flow, To such a beautiful poem! I loved every word of this! Excellently Done, August!

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Re: The Passing

September 24, 2005, 5:29 pm

Stunning, you captured so much here....beautifully sad and excellently penned....Hugs Rox

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Re: The Passing

September 26, 2005, 9:08 pm

This breaks my heart... *tear* B~

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September 27, 2005, 11:45 pm

Thank you Katy..you always leave the nicest comments. Sky

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September 27, 2005, 11:47 pm

Rox..Thank you, appreciate your sweet reply. Hugs back, Sky

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Re: The Passing

September 27, 2005, 11:49 pm

Ahhh..B. thank you, no tears now. Thanks again for feeling this one, Sky

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September 28, 2005, 1:30 am

This has a Very melancholy feel to it Sky. I like it! ~ Becky

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Re: The Passing

September 29, 2005, 12:13 am

Sky yeah this one is so good and with brevity such as this you need to have a hook something for the reader to latch onto and for me it was this Quote:Secret whispers trail Summers hem as she passes,...

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